Final First Draft: Double page spread 2

Final First Draft: Double page spread 1

Final First Draft: Contents

Final First Draft: Front cover

Favourite photos from shoots

Double page spread so far...

This is the progress I have made so far on my double page spread; I have a lot of improvements I want to make to it. Firstly, although I like the image I think that it may be two dark on the left hand side of her face, I also think it takes up to much of the page. I like how the bubbles stand out and make the image quite unique and interesting. I will improve this by adding the introduction to my article and a background to this page.

Contents page so far..

This is what I’ve done of my contents page so far. I really like my contents page because I feel that it conforms to the codes and conventions of a music magazine. I like the image because it is very simple; however because of the blurred background the image fits into the page and highlights that she is an indie artist. I have decided that because I have a few more things I want to add to the contents page, such as a band index, contents models photos and a description under each heading, so in order to fit all this in I will be making my contents page a double page in order to fit it all in. I know that this works in a music magazine as Kerrang! magazine do this too.